Pt. II, Ch. 37: [Interlude/Alvar] “I did not like how he was looking at me.”

Interlude
North of the Bridge, City of Feldaren
Saturday Evening

Alvar Leto had been in Feldaren for three weeks and was nothing but disappointed.  He’d heard great things about the city from older friends in his father’s court, and over the time he’d been here, had discovered that he was too young for every one of them.  At home, gambling and other entertainments were illegal, but if your silver or your banknotes were good, nobody cared if you were 15, or for that matter whether you were a baron’s son or a cobbler’s.  One could drink legally at 16, and if you stuck to the rowdier places in the port, nobody cared if you were a little younger, either.

Here in Feldaren, everything was backwards.  Gambling was legal, but hard to find and strictly for those over 18, the local definition of adults.  The skin trade was supposedly legal, but highly regulated and equally out of bounds until he was 18.  Rumors of how much fun the place was could hang – he’d been sent away several times, however politely, and the drinking age was 18 as well.

School was much more serious than he’d had at home, and with Saturday classes of all things! The Feldarenese girls his own age he’d met were utterly unimpressed by his family name, and all told, he was getting fed up.  He would have been ready to just head back to Fenrik, but he didn’t want to give his shrew of a stepmother the satisfaction.

Fortunately, the one place where his name did carry some weight was at the embassy; his father was not just a baron, but part of the junta who’d been running the country since the last king fled.  The ambassador had been happy to share rum from his own supply, and while he didn’t have enough of a sense of any of the staff’s loyalty or interest in gambling with him directly, they had been able to find the address of a card room which would likely take him without questioning his age.

The neighborhood “North of the Bridge” had an unimaginative name, but it was easy to find.  It wasn’t supposed to be a nice neighborhood, but it reminded him of the port areas in his hometown of Hertsag. There were times when he couldn’t stand the locals’ insistence on cleanliness!

The place was upstairs, with its own entrance above a bar.  Surprisingly small; it must have originally been an apartment.  Only one person was there, a woman only slightly older than he was.  She wasn’t really his type, fair almost to the point of paleness, and slender with mousy brown hair and likely rather plain below a little too much makeup.  The dress she wore did not suit her, although he wasn’t sure what would have.

His disappointment must have shown on his face, as she said, “Nobody’s here yet, but you’re welcome to wait.”

Alvar was never happy to wait, but he had to smile that she wasn’t rushing him out or asking him for an adult identity card. She spoke English but with an accent that sounded like she grew up speaking Old Imperial, his own native tongue, and he replied in it, “I understand. There will be cards here soon, yes?

Later, yes,” she said, replying in the same language. “We just provide the tables and a dealer,” to which she gave a slight curtsy.

I’ll wait, thanks.”

She gestured to the sofa. “Do you want a drink?” she asked.

When he nodded assent, she stepped out.

She came back in with a glass of red wine.  It was fortified and very sweet, and he wondered for a moment if she knew that it was generally the style preferred in his home country.  He sipped it and grabbed a news magazine from the end table.  He hadn’t read more than a few lines before he passed out.

Consciousness came back slowly…

When he got his wits about him, he was not in the card room he’d left.  Wherever he was, the floor was cold, his hands and feet were bound, and someone was shining a bright light on him.

“Where am I?” he croaked; his voice weaker than he expected.

“You’re up quicker than we expected,” said a male voice from behind the light. “We’ll be asking the questions.”

“You’re brave for kidnappers,” he said. “Do you know who my father is?” Granted, he was a legitimized bastard, and his stepmother was none too fond of him, but he didn’t think she’d have him kidnapped.

“Not a clue,” said another voice; this was much rougher than the last. “Should we care?”

“My father’s part of the junta in Fenrik.  If you harm me, he’ll…” and a large arm reached past the light to belt him.

“Got it. We don’t care, then,” said the rough voice.

“Who is your mother?” asked a woman’s voice.  He thought it might be the one from the card room.

“One of the old Baron Torens’ younger daughters,” said Alvar.

“Damn it,” said the smoother man’s voice. “He’s telling the truth, or thinks he is.”

“With this many wards, how are you so sure?” asked the woman’s voice.

“I suppose we’ll have to test his blood,” said the smoother man’s voice.

The same large arm reached out with a blade and scratched his cheek.  It wasn’t deep, but he could feel a dribble of blood running down his face.  The man scraped it up using the same blade, and he could feel the warmth of an attempt to heal the wound.  He hadn’t heard any of the three voices casting, so their healer must have been very good indeed.  Unfortunately, instead of healing him, it sparked.

“Someone very distrusting must have cast his wards,” said the woman’s voice again.

“So, they did,” said the smoother man’s voice.  Then, away from Alvar, he said “is the blood a match?”

“It’s not,” said the rougher man’s voice.

“What a waste,” said the smoother man’s voice. “I guess we’ll need to be rid of him. Do you want to do the honors?”

“Gladly,” said the woman’s voice. “I did not like how he was looking at me.”

Alvar started to struggle, but it did no good.  The woman stepped into the light holding a thin blade, and sure enough she was the same woman he’d met at the card room.  That was clearly a trap, and not for me! His last thoughts swirled between anger and thinking without her makeup, she’s prettier than I thought, and ended with a searing pain on the side of his head followed by darkness.

Pt. II, Ch. 36: “Last, and I suppose not least, we have the Dueling Club.”

Saturday, Sept 5th, 12:15pm (after 4th period)
Arts Center Main Hall

The main hall wasn’t crowded – it seemed like the students who had chosen to attend were mostly just first-years.  Our former tour guide – and the student council vice president – had ended up as the presenter, and they were going through sports clubs first.  It was mostly some very bland introductions – typically, someone coming up in gym clothes or a team uniform, and a lot like the one person we knew- “Hi, I’m Amy, and I’m here to tell you about the girls’ Track and Field club.  If you like to run, come join us in the warm-up area outside the swimming pool gate,” and a few sports clubs or teams that had put on demonstrations.   Joel made an appreciative comment about the uniforms of the girls’ tennis club, and the captain of the basketball club spent a minute or so doing some ball tricks – probably  not up to globetrotters’ standards, but it got some applause from the audience.

The fencing club was last, which I’d been curious about since Kai had said he was part of their demonstration.  The VP was unhappy to introduce them – “Last, and I suppose not least, we have the Dueling Club.”

The representative for the club was the red-haired third-year representative I’d pointed out to Joel at the opening ceremony.  She wore a costume straight out of Peter Pan, or maybe Robin Hood – green peaked hat, with a feather, and a blouse and skirt to match.  She bypassed the podium, drew what I thought was a fencing foil, and yelled “En garde!”

From the other side of the stage, someone entered in partial armor – a chest plate and a helmet with bars covering their face.  Except for the face guard, it was a very conquistador sort of look. This opponent was holding another foil and wore a larger sword on their hip.  They did several passes, looking for all the world like something out of a 1930s movie, not at all like the little bit of athletic fencing I’d seen.

Then, after a short while and a few passes across the stage, the armored person withdrew to one side.  The redhead went up to the podium and said “Hi!  I’m Gwen, and this was a little demonstration of why I joined the fencing club.  We are the Academy’s oldest athletic club, and we are lucky to have a two-time junior national epee champion, as well as the youngest person ever to go to nationals in dueling sword.” At this, the armored student saluted Gwen with the larger blade now out of the scabbard.  It was a very serious looking sword.

“We also have a lot of fun.  While the social clubs get ready for their presentations, I’m going to leave you with two of our members answering the age-old question: who would win, a knight, or a samurai?”

And with that, there was a loud yell from behind the stage, and someone ran out holding what I thought was a katana… and like what the armored student carried, it was metal one.  Like the other, they were partially armored, and I realized after a moment this must have been Kai, who’d said he’d be part of the presentation.  He’d said he did kendo, which I’d thought used wooden swords, or something similarly non-lethal.

The two came together with a crash, Kai chopping downward, which the original armored student parried with ease.  The two circled each other, approaching briefly, briefly clashing, and stepping back.  They appeared equally matched at first, but after a few cycles, the first one – with the western sword – sped up a lot.  Beating back another swing, their sword struck out at Kai’s armored chest and landed with a loud clang.  He stepped back and saluted the other, who bowed, and did the same.

“Looks like the knight wins,” said Gwen. She waved her hat at the audience as she left the stage.

Joel had decided to leave at that point; he wanted to help set up the soccer club open house. I stuck around on my own to see if anything looked interesting.  A couple did; there was a board game club, two different magic clubs (the “Mages Club” and the “Magical Research Club”, whatever the difference was) and while I had and have never had any interest in acting, there were three separate theater clubs and each of them had a mini performance.

Towards the end, there was another club that seemed to annoy Neil, “And now we’ll hear from the personal computer club.”

The student presenting waved. “Hey folks.  Some of you who were at the lower school already know this, but we have a student-run computer lab.  It’s a good place to write your papers, and if we’re not too busy you can use them to play games, too.  These guys” – and he gestured back towards Neil – “changed the rules this year so it can only be open if there’s a club member supervising, so we could really use a few more members.  You don’t need to know anything about computers although if you do it couldn’t hurt.  Oh, and if you used it last year and think the new rule is stupid, please tell the student council that.”

Neil looked like he was about to rush the computer club guy off the stage, but he wandered off on his own, without ever having either introduced himself or saying where the lab was.

Sports Center, Dueling Club room

I’d remembered roughly where we’d seen the sign on our first tour; it was downstairs below the main gym.   The room itself was locked when I got there, and there were three of us who’d had an interest coming out of the presentations – a first year boy, plus Mina Fremis, who I’d met briefly at physics, and myself.  The first year introduced himself as Galen Alcorn. We’d barely had a chance to do a round of introductions when the doors finally opened.

Gwen opened the door; she was in the regular warm weather gym uniform.  “Welcome!” said Gwen.

The fencing room was long, and somewhat narrow – otherwise like any other room in the gym except for the lack of windows; there were two doors at the far end, and a few people were already there – I recognized Kai, but no one else.  They were mostly stretching, but on spotting us Kai came over.

“So, you three wanted to learn about the club?” asked Gwen.

I nodded, as did Galen.  Mina, however, simply said, “I was planning to join.”

“You’ve fenced before?” asked Gwen.

“At my old school, yes.”

“How about you two?” asked Gwen.

I shook my head, and Galen said, “No.”

“Don’t worry,” said Gwen.  “Most of us won’t bite.”

Kai added. “Mark is the transfer student from my homeroom that I was telling you about, Gwen. Mina is also a second-year transfer and in our physics class.”

“I see.” Gwen raised an eyebrow, and then to Galen, “How about you?”

“Your presentation made this look like a lot of fun,” he said.

Gwen smiled. “Good! That was what we were going for.”

“It’s cool if we’re just here for PE credit?” I asked.

“Of course.  We have practice Tuesday and Thursday in the PE periods.  After school and Saturday practices aren’t mandatory, but if you’d like to check our practice out today it will give you a good sense of things.  If so, you should probably start getting warmed up.

“Mina, I can show you the stretches we use.  Kai, can you show Galen and Mark?”

I am not particularly flexible, but the stretches they were doing to start weren’t particularly tough.  As we worked through them, I asked Kai, “That was you up on the stage, right?”

He nodded.

“You looked cool.  Do you practice with a real sword?”

“Not usually, no.  That whole thing was Gwen’s idea.  It was pretty crazy.”

“Who was it you were fighting?”

He grimaced and nodded over at one of the back doors which had just opened.  There was Cory.

“Are you sure I’m actually going to be welcome here?” I asked Kai.

Pt. II, Ch. 35: “How do you not know to be prepared in advance for a lab?”

Saturday, Sept 5th
School

Having to get up for our first day of Saturday classes had me grumpy, although yes, I’m often grumpy in the morning.  When Joel and I got to the lab room, most people had already paired up and picked lab stations.  Jack and his partner were off on their own, while Kai, Amy and two other girls had staked out three stations between them.  The two other girls were quite different; one was quite ordinary in a school where “ordinary” tended to clean up better than at home, and she had the silver pin of a scholarship student, hers in the form of a rose.

The second stood out, and I wasn’t sure if it was in a good way.  She was around my height, taller than many of the girls here.  Except for some bangs, her brown hair was pulled back into a simple ponytail, and rather than the regular uniform she was wearing a baggy sweatshirt and track pants – our colder-weather gym uniform, sized up.  She had a silver dragon pin, so she was a local, and I realized that she was the first person I’d seen up close in this world who also wore glasses.

I’m close to blind to fashion, but while she wasn’t unattractive, she was a girl who either was consciously choosing comfort over appearances, or who was even blinder to appearances than I am.

Kai introduced us.  “Mark, Joel, this is Mina,” indicating the girl standing with him at his station. “She’s also new here,” and then indicating the girl a few steps away, “and this is Cory.”

Mina curtsied; I don’t think I’d ever seen someone do that in real life.  “It’s a pleasure to meet you both,” she said.

“Hi,” said Cory.  Then, to me directly, “I guess we’re lab partners.”

“I guess so.  It’s good to meet you.”

The teacher was already there, and not long after he took attendance and let us know to start the lab without further instructions.  I started looking through the lab manual for setup instructions, which seemed like the right thing to do.  From a quick look around, a lot of people were doing the same, although both of our immediate neighbors had started getting pieces together.  Cory was doing the same, and started to say, “Can you hand me…” and then noticed I was reading the lab manual. “What are you doing?” she asked.

“Reading the instructions.”

“You didn’t read them in advance.” That was not a happy look she gave me.  “How do you not know to be prepared in advance for a lab?” OK, scratch unhappy.  Furious?  I wondered for a moment if I was about to get punched.

“Sorry,” I said, stepping back.  “I never had a problem with this at my old school.”

“How the heck did I get paired with someone like you?” she asked, and then continued, “Never mind.  Just stay out of my way and take notes.  You can do that much, right?”

She then added, more to herself, “This isn’t the first time I’ve had to do one of these by myself.”

Cory powered through the entire lab, and two extra credit problems, in sixty of the ninety-five minutes we had, all without a word to me except figures to write down.  She stopped a few times to make sure what I was writing down was correct.  At the end, she went up to the teacher, and while I couldn’t make out everything, she seemed to be asking if she could get started on the next lab or more extra credit.  The answer appeared to be a “no.”

She came back to the lab station, took the lab notebook I had been writing in, and said, “I’ll put it in your mailbox once I make a copy.  You get to clean up.”  Then she walked out of the room.

Everybody else was still working, so I went to the teacher to ask what I should be doing.  He said to clean up our station, and then I was free to go as well.  I cleaned up the materials, and then figured I’d get ahead on my history reading while I waited for Kai, Amy, and Joel to be ready to head back to our homeroom.

At homeroom, the girls who’d volunteered for the festival committee had a handout, which I figured I’d look at later. Before we headed off to our next classes, Kai took a moment to speak to me.  “That was classic Cory.  I’m sorry I didn’t warn you.”

“She’s always like that?” I asked.

“She used to be worse,” said Kai.  “I’ve known her since the second year at the lower school, and Amy was in her homeroom in the first year there.  Back then, she’d have been a lot louder in telling you off.”

“How bad was it to try to read out of the lab manual, anyway?”

“For most people, it wouldn’t be a problem,” he said.  “I mean it’s always a good idea to read through it in advance, but it’s only a big deal for someone really serious about taking honors in the science track.  If you want to get all the extra credit in, you need to avoid wasting time.”

“If she’s that serious, how did I get paired with her?”

“We were talking about that before you got to class.  Cory looked at last year’s rankings.  Except for transfers, it looks like the teacher just paired people up in rank order.  You must not have been kidding when you said you are good at taking tests, because whatever unofficial rankings he used put you and Joel both at the top of the class.”

“Could that have been just because we are transfers?”

“Cory didn’t think so,” said Kai.  “Otherwise, one of you two would have been paired with Mina, but she apparently ranked behind both Cory and Amy.”

“Interesting.”

“Really,” said Kai.  “I think she’d actually been looking forward to working with you.”

“Damn.  Well, that didn’t last long.”

“Don’t worry about it.”  He gave me a pat on the shoulder.  “Most of the class is going to want to switch to lab partners they know better, so you probably won’t have to pair with her again.”

Saturday, after class

My meeting after class with Ms. Calliot had gone only slightly better than physics lab.  I’d thrown together a couple of topics I might be interested in.  She’d rejected all of them.

“Mark, I can see part of your problem with papers.  You aren’t trying to make and support a thesis.  Every one of these topics is an open-ended prompt for a narrative.”

“How do you mean?” I asked.

“Let’s take one of these as an example – you have ‘How did Zagras liberate the Kingdom of Kala?’”

I nodded.

“There are a couple of good works on the subject, and while it’s well into antiquity there might be enough primary sources to write a good paper, there isn’t any thesis as a part of it.  Do you have a sense what specifically you wanted to write about it?”

“I’d planned to read through a more detailed history than the textbook, sum up the arguments for it, and go over the basic timeline.”

“Was that kind of survey paper adequate at your last school?” she asked.

“I didn’t get a lot of As, but it was always better than just passing.”

“I see,” she said.  “It may be good enough in your regular history class, at that, although I don’t recommend it.  It’s usually a lot more work to do that well than a more focused paper.”

“How should I have approached it, then?”

“You want not just to have a general idea, but a specific proposition that you can support with evidence.  I don’t recommend this as a paper at your level, but the classic argument is whether Zagras’s marriage to the goddess Mina was literally the case in life or a metaphor for after his death and deification. As a paper topic, you’d take one side or the other.”

“OK,” I said.  “How do you recommend I narrow these down?”

“I don’t recommend you do, at least for this first paper.  Unless you feel very strongly about it, I’m going to give you a topic.  I’d like you to write an outline, or at least two pages, by next Friday’s class.  If it looks OK, you can expand it to the full first paper.”

She took out a sheet of paper, and at the top wrote,

Between the fall of the second Empire and the rise of the
Great Kingdom, warfare was the first business of the state.

“Is that clear enough?” she asked.

“Is that specific to the nations that are now part of the Great Kingdom?” I asked.

“You can limit it to those,” she said, “or try to make a case for or against it for all human nations during that time.  Which do you think is easier?”

“To be more specific rather than more general?”

“That’s usually the case, yes.”

Joel and I had planned to eat lunch during our free period, before the clubs assembly, so I headed off to the lunchroom to meet him.

Pt. II, Ch. 34: “Never mind that. I just rescued a girl.”

Thursday, Sept 3rd
School and then our apartment

The bike ride to school in the morning had gone well; it was a long but straight shot on the boulevard to school, and unlike my ride into the city back home, I didn’t have to go over any bridges.  There was a covered bike rack next to the sports center; it was almost full since I arrived late during my free period.  Amazingly, many of the bikes weren’t locked up at all, and those that were had locks that wouldn’t have lasted long in New York – there wasn’t a U-lock among them.  I wondered whether this was just that safe, or if you could get some a spell that would protect your bike from thieves.

Classes were still just starting today, so there wasn’t much new, and it was nice to have found a small crew to hang out with – Jack and Kai, plus Amy came along for lunch today.  We had another mandatory PE orientation for the last two periods of the day, and then Joel headed off to the soccer team meeting with Jack, while I biked home.

It was still during work hours, so traffic was lighter than in the morning, and I worked up a good sweat biking back in the heat.  Once at the apartment, I brought my bike around the back bring it straight into the laundry room and was just going to go in when I heard a cat meowing.

There was a gray and white cat, peeking out of the bushes behind the house.   It looked at me, meowed again, and ducked back into the bushes.

I showered and thought about what to do with the rest of my afternoon.  I hadn’t really had any time at home to myself outside of the late evenings; at home, my brother kept to himself and my folks, if they were home at all in the early evenings, were usually busy grading papers or working on some publication or other.

I decided I was going to make something to bring in for my lunch tomorrow; I looked in the refrigerator and didn’t see anything I’d like.  When we’d been moving in, there hadn’t been time to go ourselves, so Joel’s mom had given Dormer’s housekeeper a shopping list.

There were no cold cuts, nor any cheese I knew I’d like – although there was an unlabeled brick of soft white cheese that I tried and rewrapped.  It might have been the local version of jack; creamy enough, but quite bland; better to cook with than for sandwiches.  What we had were too many vegetables which were going to go uneaten unless Dormer sent his housekeeper over to cook them.

The pantry was mostly full of unfamiliar stuff, although the local Crispy-Squares cereal was decent.  There was pasta, at least, and sliced bread but nothing like a bag of sandwich roll.

I decided to go to the nearest market and see what I could get.  My dad had left me with a full semester’s worth of lunch money and allowance, the lunch money particularly generous since I was getting free lunch on the scholarship.  At home, it would have been a little over $300; at the exchange rate here, it has made for 3 and a quarter Imperials… 250 mil, as they’d have said here.  It felt like a lot of money for someone my age, but it had to cover me until winter break.

I walked up to the boulevard, and a couple of blocks down found the place Dormer had sent his housekeeper – called Super Jordi’s.  It was small for a supermarket, but clearly more than a convenience store.  They also had a meat and deli counter, and all I was able to get enough lunch meat and bread for a week’s worth of sandwiches, as well as some more familiar cheese and some canned foods.  Not bad at all for a week’s lunch money!

On the way back into the house, I got meowed at again.  There was the same cat, in the bushes near the front of the house.  It looked at me expectantly and meowed again.  I decided to offer it a slice of ham out of my shopping bag.  It wouldn’t approach me, but when I put it on the ground about halfway towards it and walked back to the door, it dashed out and took it.  As I went into the house, I was almost sure I heard it say, “thank you!” but must have been reading too much into another meow.

Math homework awaited me, and I lost track of time.  Joel came back quite a bit later, practically bursting in.  “You wouldn’t believe what just happened to me!” he said.

“I’m guessing this isn’t about the cat in our yard?”.

“There’s a cat in our yard?” He shook his head.  “Never mind that.  I just rescued a girl.”

“You what?”

“Rescued a girl.  You remember the girls we saw on our first ride to school on Tuesday, right?

I nodded.

“One of them was on the streetcar coming home, and there were a couple of shady looking guys who followed her off, so I followed them off.  Sure enough, they were hassling her and when I told them not to, one of them grabbed her bag so I chased after them and got it back.”

“Dormer is not going to like that at all.”

The door opened just as I said that, and both Count Dormer and Special Agent Morgan walked in.  “What is it that I’m not going to like?” said Dormer.

After Joel had finished his story – and in greater detail – Dormer was, as expected, not happy.  “Joel, while you said you were bigger than they were, they outnumbered you, and one of them could have had a knife or worse.  You don’t have any magical wards, which they could have had, or bigger friends nearby.”

“I can take care of myself,” he said.

“Have you ever been in a real fight?” asked Dormer.

“Not really, no,” said Joel.

“You need to be more careful. Especially if you don’t want either Agent Morgan or me to be shadowing you closely.”

“I understand,” said Joel.

Dormer told us a little more about what to exChpect; it sounded like Ms. Yali would be back to start teaching us (well, mostly Joel) some magic next week, and that at some point they’d be doing some self-defense classes as well.

After Morgan left, Dormer had some more questions.  “So, was this the girl from your class that you were talking about from the trip committee?”

“No,” said Joel.  “Violet’s a first year.  I didn’t realize it until after I got her bag back, but she’s in my Obdresti literature class.”

“Was she the one you were pointing out to me at the opening assembly?” I asked.

“No, that wasn’t Violet.  She said they usually took the streetcar together, though.  Maybe I can get her to introduce you.”

I shook my head.  “I think that’d be a bad idea if you want to keep a good impression with Violet.”

“Don’t sell yourself so short, Mark,” said Dormer.

Dormer had a few more questions about Violet; Joel had walked her to near her house, and it sounded like her parents were rich.  When they were done talking, Dormer said, “I don’t want to be too negative, you know.  It was not smart, but it was a very gallant thing you did for her.  Your instincts did you credit.”

I had one question for him before he left.  “In this world, can cats talk?”

“House cats?” he asked, and I nodded.

“Not normally,” he said.  “Why?”

I told him about the gray and white cat outside.  He explained a bit more about the house’s magic wards, and finished saying, “I don’t think there’s any chance a magical creature could have gotten in.  You must have been imagining things, and it’s not a good idea to feed strays.”

Friday, Sept 4th
School

We had our first physics class the day before, and it seemed harmless enough.  The class had its labs on Saturday mornings, and things took a turn for the weird part way through class on Friday when the teacher, Dr. Amril, started talking about lab partner assignments.

“I noticed that we have exactly the same number of girls and boys in the class,” he said, with a smile that was a little creepy coming from a teacher. “I know you all probably have friends that you’d like to work with but trust me… at your age you should consider this an opportunity.”

He then ran through the class roster, in order of the girls’ last names.  A girl from another homeroom named Mina Fremis got paired with Kai.  Amy got paired with Joel.  Then, when he got to N, the teacher called for someone named Cory Nement who was paired with me.

There was a bit of a buzz in the room, and it didn’t sound encouraging.  I meant to ask Kai about it, but by the time the teacher got through the rest of the class, and we went off to homeroom, I had forgotten.

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Pt. II, Ch. 33: [Interlude/Violet] “Are you two giving her a hard time?”

Interlude
Thursday, Sept 3rd
Surrat-Efrel Boulevard streetcar
About 6:30

Violet was nervous.  OK, very nervous.  She had gotten out of tennis practice and changed, but Tess turned out to be stuck with student council work until late, and Violet had felt brave enough to try coming home alone.

There had been a fair number of Queen Sara students who got on with her, but as the streetcar had gone along most of them filtered out, the car was now mostly adults and a few students from other schools.  Two boys who’d come on recently kept staring at her.  They were in a uniform she didn’t recognize, with grey collarless jackets.

She’d be glad to be off, and her stop was coming up.  It was a little bit of a push to get from her seat to the door, and as she got off her nerves got worse.  When she and Tess normally got off, no one else was leaving, but she heard people moving to get off after she did.

She didn’t look back and just started walking for home.  Someone behind her called out “Etay tesaya,” or something like that; she recognized that it was Old Imperial but had never learned it.  The voice was louder, and getting closer, “Jessit tesaya.”

Then one of the boys from train stepped around her, blocking her way.  He said something else in old imperial. It was too quick to follow; then from behind her she heard, in strongly accented English, “What’s the matter, rich girl?  Don’t understand us?”

She tried to step to the side, not liking being stuck between two strangers.  “No, I don’t speak Old Imperial.”

“She doesn’t speak Old Imperial,” said the one who’d been behind her.  “My friend thinks your very pretty.”

She did not like the way either of the boys were looking at her.  She was about to run, when another person stepped up – and in unaccented English, said “Are you two giving her a hard time?”

She looked up – he was taller than the two boys, and around thirty centimeters taller than she was – and thought he looked familiar, as did the blue track suit.  The one of the boys who’d spoke English said, “it’s none of your business,” and tried pushing him.  It didn’t work.

“I’m making it my business,” said man in the blue track suit, and he pushed back, hard enough to knock the boy down.

The other boy, who’d been the first to talk to her, said “kayjet,” then grabbed her bag out of her hands and ran.  The one who’d fallen followed.  The man who’d stopped to help said “watch this for me,” leaving something at her feet, and ran after.  She looked down; it was a backpack.  A moment later, she realized why the track suit looked familiar; it was out-of-season gym clothes from her own school.

She couldn’t quite see what happened about a block away when the man – taller boy, given that he went to her school – caught up to the two boys in grey, but there was some shouting, and then the third boy walked back holding her bag.

“Are you alright, miss?” he asked, giving her the bag.

She nodded, not looking up at him.

“You go to Queen Sara too, right?” he asked.

She nodded again.

“I’m Joel,” he said. “I think we’re actually in one class together.”

She looked up at him.  “Oh! Yes, I think so.  You’re also in Obdresti Literature?”

“Yeah,” he said.  “That’s it.”

“Thank you for getting my bag back,” she said.  “I’m Violet Conniello.”

“Good to meet you,” he said.  “Are you going to be OK getting home from here?”

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Pt. II, Ch. 32: “OK, maybe there would be a bright side to it.”

Weds, Sept 2
Upper School Main Building

I was wearing my glasses again and had decided to learn more about side effects before letting someone else use magic on me.  I had woken up in the middle of the night, mostly with just the usual need to go to the bathroom, but also with a headache.  When I came back to bed, I wanted to read a little before going back to sleep, but the spell must have been in a halfway state of wearing off – my eyes were too blurry to read, but not yet back to a normal level where my glasses were comfortable.

The headache was gone in the morning, but the missed sleep had me grumpy, as did the prospect of my first PE class.  Dormer had sent his housekeeper over again, and after breakfast, the streetcar was the same.  The main difference was that instead of the opening assembly, we had to go straight to our homeroom.

On the way, we stopped by our “mailboxes” – a crate of folders at one end of the floor where the second-year homerooms were.  Joel checked his first; it had a bunch of fliers for clubs, and for class events.  Mine had the same, which I stuffed in my backpack, but there was also a card, which said

Please come by to see me in my office any time after the 6th period. – Ms. G. Calliot

It was dated the day before.  CrudNothing to do about it now; this was the teacher for my advanced World History course.  I had yet to meet her, as I’d have the first class in the afternoon.  Homeroom was quick; our class had a special double period of PE to get to, and we were dismissed to go change.

Joel and I followed the rest of the class, as beyond “somewhere in the Sports Center building” I had no idea where we were supposed to go, and I don’t think Joel did either.  As it turns out, there were four homerooms out of the ten in the 2nd-year class all set to do the annual fitness testing and gym orientation, and we were supposed to meet at the main field behind the building.

Our class got split between boys and girls, and the boys from our group got to run through something annoyingly like the “Presidential physical fitness tests” we were subjected to in elementary school. Not everything was the same – there were no weight sets involved in elementary school – but I still couldn’t do a pull-up.  The least annoying part was the longer run, or jog in my case – and until I looked up the conversion of miles to meters, I’d felt good about my time.  In gym class the prior year I’d never been able to get more than a few seconds under 10 minutes a mile.  Had a little less than a year more bicycling over a bridge helped?  I was at 9:15, which sounded good until later when I checked the conversion to miles – 1500 meters are just enough short of a mile that I was basically where I’d been a year before.

We were about to be dismissed to go to our third period classes with a fair bit of time to spare, and I was dreading having to use the shower around other people, when the gym teacher called out “Mark Berg and Joel Ross, I need to talk to you before you go.”

So, we did.  “You two are transfers?” he asked.  When we nodded, he continued.  “That’d be why we don’t have a record of you passing a swim test last year.  After you change, drop by the PE department office.  We’ll have to schedule you for one.”

We changed, and we went by the office and signed up to take our swim test with a bunch of first years the following week.  On the way out, Joel was concerned. “I’m not sure I’ll be able to pass that,” he said.

“Why not?  We both had swimming in 8th grade, you passed that.”

“We weren’t in the same gym classes that year, remember?  I passed the class, but I think it was mostly the teacher taking pity. I haven’t tried swimming since.”

“Urk,” I grunted. “They said it’s not timed, you just swim to the other end, no particular way. Just kick your way down on your back, that’s what I’m going to do.”

“Says the guy who has floated around in a pond nearly every summer.”

I shook my head. “Fine, fine.  Why didn’t you ask what happens if you don’t pass?”

“I didn’t think it applied to us, but it was in the student handbook. I get to take swim lessons as my PE.”

“That doesn’t sound bad,” I said.

“It would be a lot of extra time on top of soccer.”

“Maybe the swim classes are co-ed? If so, you’d meet some first-year girls.”

We were almost to our classroom, but he laughed.  “OK,” he said, “maybe there would be a bright side to it.”

Up until the afternoon, the day went pretty much like the day before. Mr. Kirill’s English class and then social studies, before lunch.  Today there was a choice of hot lunches – slices of something called sibbat breast, a white meat that looked a bit like chicken or turkey, in a creamy sauce, or a baked macaroni-and-tomato sauce. Joel tried the sibbat, but I figured I’d best be cautious about meats I’d never heard of and got the macaroni.  Jack and Kai had brought lunch as usual; today Amy joined the four of us and had brought her own lunch as well.

Joel liked the sibbat, although he said it tasted a little fishy.  From what Kai and Amy said, they were a distant relative of dragons, but domesticated and not much bigger than a turkey.  Having a backbone plus four legs and wings pretty much precluded being related to anything we have on earth. I was curious to see them but eating one… not so much.

After lunch, we had math, and then we split up; Joel had a free period, while the rest of our group had electives.  My own, advanced world history was over in the other classroom building, a floor down from the third-year classrooms, and it was the first classroom I saw that looked a little different.  Most of the classrooms were a regular grid of desks set apart from each other, with a few more in each room than there were students.  This one was set up with the kind of one-piece chair-and-writing table a lot of our classrooms at home had.  They were arranged in a circle, and while there was a big desk at the head of the room, the teacher was sitting in one of the same chairs.

I wasn’t the first to arrive but there weren’t many students yet. Dean Jerdew had told me the class was going to be mostly first years, who had either placed out of the regular world history class with their exam scores or had done the honors history course at the lower school.  Since the seating was a circle, there wasn’t any way to hide in the back like I usually would have.

A large group of students came in just after me; judging by the conversations, they must have all known each other.  While we weren’t required to wear the uniform jacket and tie on a non-assembly day, most people had ditched only the jacket; some of the girls had switched to a bow of the same blue instead of the tie.  It still seemed very formal compared to school at home and looking out at everyone rather than at their backs I felt a little conscious of having skipped the tie myself.

It was not long before maybe three quarters of the seats were filled, and the teacher called roll.  I hadn’t expected to recognize any of the names in the class, and we must have been about half-way through when I caught a name that sounded familiar.  “Tess Hahn?”   The “Yes, ma’am” came back from a short blonde girl, seated in the group near the teacher.  It took me a minute, but I realized where I’d seen her – she was one of the two we’d seen on the streetcar yesterday, and who had been the 1st year class rep at the opening assembly.

The first class was typical – we got a syllabus, our textbook, and a pile of photocopied readings.  It sounded like we were going to be writing a lot for the class; that worried me.  Like I told the dean, I’ve never been good at finishing papers on time.

Then it was over, and I figured this was a good time to check in with the teacher.  Walking up to the front as others filed out, I asked “Ms. Calliot?  You left a card in my mailbox, saying I should stop by your office.”

“Yes. Thank you for checking in, Mark,” she said.  “I left it yesterday, but I suppose you didn’t see it until this morning.”

I gave an embarrassed shrug, “Sorry about that.”

“No problem,” she said.  “Dean Jerdew explained your situation to me. Do you have a free period now?”

When I nodded, she went on.  “Then please follow along to the faculty office, and we can talk now rather than after the end of the day.”

When we got there, and she’d set things down, she asked me, “Do you know why I asked to speak to you?”

“I don’t,” I said, “but to guess, it’s about my placement into your class?”

She thought for a moment.  “That’s a decent guess, and it’s indirectly the case. It’s more about making sure you’re able to succeed at this school overall.”

I must have looked confused.  She went on, “I’m sure the dean mentioned that it’s unusual to have students with your mixed academic background, especially on scholarship.”

When I nodded, she went on, “when that’s happened, or when we’ve for other reasons taken students who’ve had academic challenges, the school usually assigns a teacher as an extra academic counselor of sorts.  Because of your interest in this class, and because I am not responsible for a homeroom this year, the dean asked me to do that for you.”

“I see.”

“We’ll meet, once a week to start, probably less later in the year.  We’ll go over how you’re doing in your other classes, and if needed, I can connect you to other resources, like tutoring or extra credit work.”

“OK.”

I must have looked or sounded nervous, “This really isn’t a bad thing, Mark. For some students, they just need the extra help learning the material.  In your case, from what the Dean said, you mostly have trouble with due dates and staying motivated. The motivation must come from you, but I can at least help you keep schedules on track.

“Normally this isn’t mandatory, just highly encouraged, but from what I’ve heard about your record, I do have to ask you to take this seriously if you’d like to remain in my class as an advanced-honors elective.  We do a lot of writing in this class, and you won’t have multiple-choice tests to fall back on.”

“What do you need me to do?” I asked.

“In general, I’d like you to keep a log of all your homework for these first two weeks of school.  For my class, I want you to get started on the first paper immediately, and I’d like you to get back to me with a couple of possible topics related to our first term’s material as soon as you can.  Did you read the syllabus during class?”

I’d scanned it.  “Kind of?”

“Please have a longer look.  Let’s check in briefly after the class on Saturday,” she said, “and if you can, I’d like you to propose the topics then in case they won’t work, or one of them needs refining.”

“OK,” I said.

“No questions for me?” she asked.

I shook my head.  “This is all really new for me.  If you’ve got a few minutes on Saturday, maybe I’ll have some then?”

I met up with Joel back at our homeroom. “What was that card about?” he asked.

“The dean asked the history teacher to keep an eye on my keeping up with the work,” I said.

Joel shrugged.  “Doesn’t sound too bad.”

“I guess not,” I said. “I’m going to have to start on a paper really early, though.”

“You’re the one who wanted to take the equivalent of AP Euro.”

“Don’t remind me.”

After we got home, Dormer dropped by to let us know that the foreign ministry had approved his request, and that Ms. Yali would start on magic lessons for Joel soon.  I was welcome to join.

For tomorrow, it seemed like a good day to try biking; Joel had his first Obdresti Literature class and had to be there one period before I did, and then he would be going to meet soccer club people after classes got out.

Pt. II, Ch. 31: [Interlude/Elise] “Have you noticed anyone unusual this year?

Interlude
Jordi’s Market, Riverside terminal
Just after 7pm

Elise was ready to leave work and still in her work clothes.  At this hour, it was better to take the train home in the casual and unflattering uniform of a convenience store employee than a girl’s school uniform.

As she left the shop, a woman walked up to her; she was an adult, but not a whole lot older.  She was wearing office clothes, like a great many of the commuters who had come into the store during her evening shift.  “Miss Shevariet?” asked the woman.

Elise had been expecting someone from Paul Jekanis’s firm to contact her, but just walking up on her way out of work was unexpected and not particularly welcome.  “Do you work for Magnus Trading?” she asked in reply.

“Yes, Miss,” said the woman.  “I’m Brinna Jekanis.  My uncle Paul told me to get some papers from you.”

The woman had an accent that reminded her of Paul Jekanis, but stronger.  It wasn’t quite what she’d have expected from someone older members of her family, but she couldn’t place it beyond that.

“Yes,” said Elise.  She started getting into her school bag when Brinna waved her off.

“Perhaps I can buy you a cup of coffee and ask you a few questions about them,” said Brinna.

Elise paused for a moment, and then nodded.  There was a lunch counter a few doors down from Jordi’s that served decent coffee, and they took a booth there.

Once seated, Elise gave her the packet she’s copied from the student council office.  It had photocopies of all the upper-school class rosters, as of the first day of school, and the contact information for those second years whose families had agreed to include them in the class directory – about three-fourths of the class.  Brinna, before opening it, handed her a small brown envelope, which Elise put away.

After looking through the photocopies, Brinna asked, “No contact information for the other two class years?”

Elise shook her head.  “I’ve got the list for my year as the second-year representative to the student council, but I didn’t have a good reason to explain wanting it for the other classes.  When they print the directory in a couple of weeks, I can get you a copy.”

“We’d appreciate that,” Jekanis said. “We’d show our appreciation even more generously if you can get us one before it’s available to the rest of the student body.”

“I’ll try, Miss Jekanis,” said Elise.  She might be able to do that; the Dean’s office handled printing them, but often looked for volunteers.  “You said you had questions?”

“Yes,” said Brinna.  “Have you noticed anyone unusual this year?  New students, foreigners, anything like that?”

“We took more transfer students than usual,” said Elise.  “Fifteen, I think, in my year.”

“Any foreigners among them?”

“I haven’t gotten to know any of them yet, and not all of them are in the directory,” said Elise, “but you can find them because the roster won’t list a homeroom teacher for the prior year.  If you’d like, we can run through the directory together if any of them supplied their information.”

They did so; of the fifteen, eleven had given contact information for the directory.   Seven were clearly local; two more probably were.  Two stood out – a girl, Mina Fremis, whose parents’ address was in the city of Kala in the Great Kingdom, and a boy, Alvar Leto, whose address was at the embassy of Fenrik.  Of the remaining four with no directory information, none stood out by name, and according to the roster, two of them were scholarship students, which made it likely they were local.

Brinna had been taking notes; her list had the two foreign transfer students, and the six not in the directory, and pointing to it, she asked “Can you find out more about these students? Anything out of the ordinary from other years would be very welcome, of course.”

Elise nodded.  Brinna kept the packet and her notes, except for the scrap with eight names.  The two went their own way, and when Elise got home, she opened the envelope she’d received.  Inside were two one-Imperial notes.  That was more than she could make in a week even if she worked up to the 20-hour legal limit for folks her age; with classes and family commitments, it was a little more than twice what she made in a typical week.

She would share most of it with her parents, but she intended to keep a little for herself.  Maybe I won’t mind the softer dress code, she thought.

Pt. II, Ch. 30: “I’m a mage with the Foreign Ministry”

Our apartment
Before dinner

We talked with Jack and Kai and Amy for a while, then headed out; most people had already headed for the streetcar except for a few die-hards who already had club activities.

We’d hadn’t gotten any written homework yet, but both English and our main Social Studies course had assigned reading.  I wasn’t sure if it was a good thing, but the English text we started with was a thick compilation of short stories.  Mr. Kirill had given us two to read and said to be ready to talk about them.  For the social studies, I was going to just skim for tonight; this year was going to be mostly Feldaren history and starting with the early local history.  I’d read an awful lot of that between the biography of the first emperor and preparing for the exam.

There was an unfamiliar car parked behind Dormer’s when we got back to the apartment, and it turned out that Dormer and an unfamiliar woman in a dark suit were waiting for us. “Joel, Mark, this is Ms. Yali.  Legatus Matsumoto asked her to stop by.”

“Good to meet you both,” she said. “I’m a mage with the Foreign Ministry; the Legatus told me where you were from, and that neither of you had any prior exposure to magic.  I’m here to evaluate Joel, to see if he can learn any.  Mark, I’d be happy to include you in the evaluation if you’d like.”

Joel shrugged and looked at me.  I’m sure I must have been grinning like an idiot, as Joel gave me an eyeroll, and Yali asked, “I’ll guess that’s a ‘yes’?”

“Yes, please,” I said.  I knew from my reading that an awful lot of people in this world could do at least a little magic, but there was never any mention about whether the newcomers had been able to learn it.

She needed a little while to set up; in the meanwhile, Dormer asked what we wanted for dinner; I suggested pizza, Joel said burgers. Dormer knew a place that did both well.  He was buying dinner tonight, and if we were hungry, we could head out whenever the evaluation finished.

The evaluation required four objects – they were on a wood tray on the dining table.  Two glass spheres, around the size of a grapefruit or a softball – one was translucent, the other clear.  The other two items were smaller; there was a piece of jewelry, made of silvery metal with a small, clear crystal attached, and a dull-colored metal bar about the size of a deck of cards.

She asked us to move chairs a few feet away from the dining table; then to sit down.  She had Dormer close the blinds and turn off the light.  The room still wasn’t dark exactly; the blinds weren’t great as I’d discovered over the past few mornings, to my annoyance, but it seemed that “not well lit” was fine for her needs.

“OK,” she said.  “For simplicity, we’re going to have Joel do each test first, and Mark can repeat it right after.”  To me, she said, “The accuracy won’t be as good for you, because you’ll have seen Joel’s responses, but it will save a lot of time.”

The first test was holding the metal bar for a moment.  After Joel held it, I did.  Nothing about it felt unusual; the surface reminded me a lot of D&D figures, or like the musket ball I had as a souvenir from visiting a historic fort with my parents a few years ago.

Once I returned it, she asked us, “Did either of you feel anything when you held it?”

“It felt cold,” Joel said.

When she didn’t ask me anything right away, I said, “It felt like a regular piece of metal.”

She checked off boxes on a sheet of paper.  “OK, are you both ready for the next test?”

“Was that lead?” I asked in response.

“In part, yes.  There’s a small percentage of magical ore alloyed in.”

“Magical ore?” Joel asked, while I got up and washed my hands.

“It’s a rare kind of metal,” she said.  “It’s not very useful in a raw state, but it can be attuned and used as a power source for magic, or to keep magical devices operating.” I remembered reading about it in the textbook – the Wizards’ guild had settled their headquarters where they did, on an island over what was this world’s equivalent of the mid-Atlantic ridge, because it was sitting on a huge seam of the stuff.  When they decided they’d lost the war, they blew it all up.

When I finished washing my hands and sat down, she told us, “Someone with a very high magical sensitivity would have felt it as warm or vibrating.”

“For the next test,” she said to Joel, “pick up the crystal.”

He did, and I thought for the briefest second that I saw a flicker of light in it.  Joel clearly felt something, as his eyes went wide with surprise for a moment.  “It feels warm,” he said.

“Interesting,” she said, and checked off some boxes.  “Please pass it to Mark.”

As he handed it to me, I thought I saw another bare flicker of light.  As I held it, it seemed like nothing more than a piece of jewelry; it was no warmer than any other small object someone had held in their hand for a few moments.  I still, somehow, kept seeing small flickers of light inside it.  I put it back on the table.  The flickers died out.

“I don’t feel anything, but I keep seeing very dim flickers of light inside it.”

“Only flickers?” Joel asked.  “It’s been glowing since I picked it up; I thought that was visible to everyone here.”

“Very interesting,” she said, and checked off some more boxes.  “That’s excellent news.

“This means that each of you has at least some basic level of magical sensitivity, maybe more than basic.  The light you each saw in the jewel wasn’t visible light; normally you must call out the power when casting, but Joel managed to activate it accidentally.  What you saw was radiation of magical energy itself; the power stored in the stone leaked quite a bit when Joel handled it.

“What I don’t know is whether either of you would have seen anything if Joel hadn’t activated it.”

Her next test required her to tap both spheres with the jewel; as she tapped each, she muttered something under her breath.  The translucent sphere, to her left, glowed with a clear white light.  The transparent one to her right didn’t change at all.

“Do you see a light on the left?” she asked us.  When we both said yes, she went on. “Good. That’s visible light, at a standard brightness.”

“Do either of you see anything in the clear one?” she asked.  I shook my head and looked at Joel.

He’d done the same, and then said.  “No, but I did see a flash when you tapped each of them with the jewel.”

“Very interesting.”  She wrote something down on her sheet, then tapped the clear sphere with the jewel again, holding it for a moment.  “Do you see anything in it now?”

“A faint light,” said Joel.

“Same here,” I said.

“Is it solid, or flickering?” she asked.

“Solid,” said Joel.

“Flickering a little,” I said.

She tapped it again, briefly.  “Is it solid now?” she asked me.

“Yes.”

“A little brighter for both of you?” she asked.

It was.  The test went on, with various taps, and questions about the brightness.  Joel saw it a little more easily than I did, but it wasn’t until we started another section that our responses differed a lot.  This section consisted of changing the colors of both spheres, and then asking if the brightness in the translucent one matched what we saw in the clear one.

She told us to let her know if the hues didn’t match, and otherwise, to let her know how bright they seemed – like the first part, she would adjust trying to match the brightness of the translucent one.  Joel saw the orange and red much more easily than I did, and two others in blue and white less easily; the other odd finding was that the hues did not match for me several times, most strongly on a couple of green ones, while they always matched for Joel.

Then, we were done.

“That’s it,” she said.  “I’ve got a few notes, but this was very clear-cut.  I don’t think I’ll need them.”

“Really?” asked Dormer, getting up.  He’d been sitting on the couch, and I’d forgotten that he was still here.  He turned the lights on, and then came over to the table.

“Yes.  Let’s go over your results first, Joel.  You have an average sensitivity for magic overall, but a very high sensitivity to solar magic, and probably an attunement to it.  That carried over in the tests to sensitivity with related elements like fire.

“You’ve got, exactly as one would expect for a solar attunement, a poor sensitivity to lunar magic and related elements like water.  I’m not set up to test for it today, but I’d be interested in seeing if you had some level of resistance there.  Given the results of the test with the power stone, I would expect you learn to use solar magic quite easily.  You’re a little old to learn a lot of magic, but I think that day to day spells should be very manageable.”

“I’m not sure what that means,” said Joel, “but it sounds good.  Dormer told me while ago there were some I should learn if I’m able.”

“Now, for you, Mark.  You also have an average sensitivity overall.  I can’t say whether it’s slightly weaker or stronger than Joel’s, because of how we did the tests all together.

“Now, as for sensitivities, I have to ask you a question – have you ever been told you may be red-green colorblind?”

“No,” I said, “and I can see red and green, but I just don’t always see color very well.”

“Mark, the milder form of red-green colorblindness doesn’t mean you can’t see the colors, just that they show up a little differently from how they should.  It’s quite common, and mostly harmless.  You should get an eye doctor check for you – I’m surprised since you have glasses that you weren’t screened for it, and if it bothers you, there are spells to cure it either temporarily or permanently.

“Without knowing that, though, the best I can say is that either you have the mild form of red-green color blindness, or you may have a few mildly reduced sensitivities – especially to life magic.  Unlike the lunar magic, it’s very easy to check if you’re resistant – would you mind if I did a brief test to see?”

“What would that involve?” I asked.

“I’ll cast a spell that gives you clearer vision temporarily.  If it works, you’re not resistant.”

“So, I won’t need my glasses?”

“Yes, for several hours,” she said.

“OK, let’s try it.” I’d always been curious about contacts.

She held the jewel for a moment; she muttered something, it flickered, and after she put it down, she walked over and touched the side of my head.  The world got oddly blurry, and I realized I’d better take my glasses off; I did.

“Can you see well now?” she asked.

“Yes,” I said.

“Excellent, you’re not resistant to life magic,” she said. She looked at her watch, and then went on, “It’s just before 5.  It shouldn’t wear off until you’re asleep overnight, but you should bring your glasses with you if you leave the house, just in case.”

She started packing her things up, and Dormer had a last question for her.  “I’d planned to ask Legatus Matsumoto to arrange for someone to teach Joel, since he’s turned out to be capable.  Are you likely to be the one she’ll ask?”

“She expects you to ask, and already spoke with me about it.  If you formally request the ministry’s help with this, yes, I’d be the one teaching him.  I’ll tell you the same thing I told her – he’d be better off with someone with more teaching experience.  Since you know her, I’ll bet you can guess what she told me.”

“Something on the order of it being a politically sensitive matter,” he said.  “If so, yes, it is.”

“Yes, that’s almost exactly what she said,” said Ms. Yali, “and if discretion is what’s needed, then please confirm with the Legatus.  I’ll have no problem starting lessons next week sometime once she signs off.”

“That’s excellent news, I’ll do that,” said Dormer.

After she’d packed and gone, Dormer drove us to dinner.  The place we went was called The Haven; it wasn’t far, just a bit north of the main station.  While we were waiting for my pizza, Joel’s hamburger, and Dormer’s half roast chicken, Dormer asked us how our day at school went.

“Pretty well, I think,” said Joel. “We only had about half of our classes today.”

I shrugged.  “The people in our homeroom seem nice.”

“Did you get to know anyone yet?” asked Dormer.

“There are a couple of guys who we sat down behind who were friendly; Jack and Kai,” said Joel.  “Kai said he was Ambassador Matsumoto’s nephew.”

“Joel also volunteered for the class trip committee,” I said, “and I think it was mainly to get to know the second-year representative.”

Joel turned a bit red.

“Oh?” said Dormer.  “A girl, I take it?”

“She’s cute,” said Joel.  “Besides, she had a point about making sure people from the other classes don’t make all the choices about the trip.”

“Sounds like a good day,” said Dormer, giving Joel a grin.  He didn’t ask anything more about our class representative, and the conversation moved on to lunches.  Dormer did not remember the food there fondly at all, and Joel again declined to have Dormer’s housekeeper prepare lunches.  It also turned out that Dormer remembered quite a few of the teachers we’d have, including Mr. Kirill; I’d known he was young, but it came as a bit of a shock to realize he’d only graduated five years ago.

Pt. II, Ch. 29: “He’s one of the two reasons the team is going to be less fun than it used to be”

Upper school main building, cafeteria
Lunch break

It had been a good morning so far; only two classes before lunch because of the assembly, Kirill’s English literature class and then math.  Of the people who had introduced themselves during homeroom, Amy had gone off to some track team thing, but Jack and Kai had joined us in the cafeteria.

Both were very skeptical of our choice to get the hot lunch, and I could see why; the stewed beef’s merits began and ended with being cheap and a generous serving. Even better, it was free for scholarship students.  Joel had finished his, but I’d picked at just enough to keep from being hungry.  Their boxed lunches looked better, and I said as much.

“You should learn to cook,” said Jack.  “Kai’s mom is an amazing cook. I make lunch for myself and my sister.  It’s not hard.”

Joel replied.  “We just got here a few days ago and haven’t even figured out where it’s good to shop for food.  Besides, this isn’t nearly as bad as the cafeteria food back home.”

It was true enough — although it ignored that he’d turned down Dormer’s offer to have his housekeeper make boxed lunches for us.  I’d figured that the food couldn’t possibly be as bad as NYC Board of Ed catering, and that much was true, but that was a very low bar.

“It can’t really have been that bad,” said Jack.

Joel gave an example I also remembered from elementary school – “Imagine a grilled cheese sandwich reheated in a plastic bag, where you can’t tell where the cheese ends and the bag begins.”

“That was typical?” asked Jack.

“It was one of the worse ones,” Joel said, “but they were usually pretty bad.”

“This is pretty typical here,” said Jack.  “Not bad, just bland, and as the term gets busier and more people start forgetting to bring lunch the lines will get worse.”

Joel shrugged.  “Makes sense.  Back at home we were right in the city, so it was easy to just go out for a slice of pizza or a bagel.”

“So are the classes here like the ones at your school?” asked Kai.

“Pretty much,” said Joel. “We switch between classrooms instead of the teachers switching, and the furniture is different, but so far it seems pretty much the same.”  He looked at me.  I shrugged.

Joel went on, “That’s just based on two classes, though, and the first day is always kind of just setting expectations, right?”

“The rest of today will probably all be like that,” said Kai.  “Which electives are you taking?”

It came out that all of us were in physics, and otherwise none of us were in the same electives.  They were surprised by Joel’s choice of Obdresti literature — when he said, “it sounded interesting” they were less than convinced.  Kai was in advanced honors biology, which sounded like their equivalent of an AP class; Jack was taking computer programming.  I was taking the advanced honors world history class, which would be mostly first years who had placed out of the regular world history class.

“Now that you mention it,” said Jack, “how did you do well enough on the history part of the exam to get a scholarship when you’d only heard of our world a few months ago?”

“That depends,” said Joel.  “For me, they let me take a history exam from our world instead.”

Kai and Jack looked at me.  After a moment, I shrugged.  “I’m just good at taking tests.”

They looked at Joel.  “He’s telling the truth,” said Joel, “and it’s annoying.  Mark also read the world history textbook they gave me, for fun, before he’d even decided to take the exam.”

“So, history’s your favorite subject?” Kai asked me.

“I always liked it, but mainly I like reading science fiction and fantasy stories,” I said, “and this world’s history is straight out of one.”

Jack and Kai both laughed.

Classroom 2-C
End of the first day of classes

Classes were over for the day, and everyone was starting to pack up.  Amy came over to check on the four of us, including Jack and Kai.  “I hope these two jokers didn’t fill your heads with bad ideas,” she said.

“Not at all,” said Joel.

“A better question is, which two are the jokers?” I asked.

Jack laughed, and I think I got a hint of a smile from both Kai and Amy.

“What is there to do after school here?” asked Joel.

“Most clubs won’t be doing anything today, but they usually meet after school,” said Jack.  “Most people go at least two days a week to an athletic club to get out of taking PE.  Most of the cultural and social clubs skip Tuesdays and Thursdays to let people do that.”

“Are all three of you in athletic clubs?” Joel asked.

“I run track,” said Amy.  “Not competitively, but the girls in the team are a fun bunch.”

“I do kendo outside of school,” said Kai, “and since there’s no kendo team here, I’m in the fencing club for my PE credit.”

“I was on the soccer team last year,” said Jack. “I’m not sure if I’m going to stay on the team this year, but I’ll be doing it for PE at least.”

“Oh, nice!” said Joel, “I was going to try out.  Why were you thinking of just doing PE?”

Jack shrugged.  “Not sure it’s going to be that much fun, and I need to get serious about my studies if I am going to get into a good college.”

“This guy who gave us a tour on Saturday was on the team,” I said.  “He said it was good for college applications. What was his name, Joel?”

“Neil… not Hayward, but something like that?”

“Oh, him,” said Jack, with something of a sour look.  “Neil Mayhan.  It’s different if you’re an officer or something, or a star player – not that our school has any of those right now.  Neil got himself made Vice-Captain.”

“Not a fan of his?” Joel asked.

“He’s one of the two reasons the team is going to be less fun than it used to be,” said Jack.  “You should still try out.  Really, if you’re any good you should make the team; most people are just doing it for phys-ed, and at least last year it was hard to find people who would take it seriously.”

Joel nodded.  “When are try-outs?”

Jack shrugged.  “The first club meeting is on Thursday after school.  I think we officially start try-outs after the open house this weekend, but I’ll introduce you to the captain. If you’re going to take it seriously, I think you’ll be in.”

“Thanks!” Joel said.

“How about you, Mark?” asked Jack.

“Not having to take PE sounds good, but I’m terrible at sports,” I said.  “There isn’t a cycling club, is there?”

Jack shook his head, then looked at Amy.  “Do you think the boys track club would let him follow along on a bike when they practice?”

Amy laughed. “I think a bike goes too fast.  Plus, they have a lot of members, so they probably won’t make exceptions.”

“That gives me an idea,” said Kai. “What about fencing?  We’re short on people after last year’s third years graduated.”

“Fencing?  I could check it out at least.  When would I have to join by to get out of PE?”

“Next week,” said Kai.

“Everybody has to go to PE this first week,” added Jack.  “Fitness tests and stuff.”

I must have grimaced.  “It’s not that bad,” said Amy.

“Does fencing have an open house, like soccer does?” I asked Kai.

“Sure do!” he said.  “A couple of us are going to have a demonstration at the clubs assembly, too.”

“OK,” I said.  “I’ll check out the demonstration, and I’ll probably come by the open house.”

Pt. II, Ch. 28: “We’ve kind of got ‘new here’ written all over us, huh?”

Upper School Main Building, Classroom 2-C

It had been a bit of a rush to get our schedules and get to our homeroom; Dean Jerdew sent one of his assistants with us to show us the way.  Confusingly, the room numbers in the main building weren’t by floor, but by class year; I don’t think either of us would have remembered without help that the second-year floor was the top floor of one of the two high school buildings.

We’d seen the classrooms empty in the spring.  Now there were students going into all of them; ours looked a little more than half full when we arrived.  After looking around, Joel eventually moved to a desk near the back where we’d come in, and I figured I’d take the desk between his and the inside wall.  There was no one sitting in front of me; the guy at the desk in front of Joel had been talking to his neighbor and a girl who was standing between their desks and Joel’s.

“Hey, are these going to be assigned seating?” Joel asked.  When the guy in front shook his head, Joel set his bag down and said “Hi, I’m Joel.”

I sat down, and added, “I’m Mark.”

Joel went on: “We’ve kind of got ‘new here’ written all over us, huh?”

Jack shrugged.  “Everybody’s new once.  I’m Jack Allard.”

After Kai and Amy introduced themselves, Jack went on, “How did you like the opening ceremony?”

“A lot more formal than our last school,” said Joel. “Same for the uniforms.  The head of school, Mittari, had some nice things to say.”

“So, the uniforms where you used to go were casual?  Nice,” said Jack.  “I thought these are pretty standard.  They explained that the full blazer and everything is only mandatory for assembly days, right?”

“Yeah, they did.  There were no uniforms at all, where we last went.  Not much of a dress code, even.”

Amy had a question, “I see the pin, but I don’t recognize it. Where are you from?”

“Oh, the eagle,” said Joel.  “That was our ambassador’s idea; we’re visiting students from the U.S., New York in particular.”

“The you-ess?” Amy paused. “Wait… New York?  Like in America, from the other side of the gate?”

I snorted.  “U.S. as in the United States… of America.  Yeah.”

“So, the gate is no longer secret?” Amy asked, “There’s an ambassador, and we’re getting exchange students now?”

“I guess,” said Joel.

“I don’t think Hull technically ranks as an ambassador,” I said, “but yes, pretty much.”

“Oh,” said Kai. “That makes some sense of something my aunt said having to do with the gate.  She’s in the Senate Diplomatic Service and was recently promoted.  I wonder if that was related.”

“We met a Legatus Matsumoto,” I replied.

“That’s her.  My dad’s sister.”

“Cool.  She was very helpful in getting this all set up,” said Joel.

“How did you end up as exchange students?” asked Jack.

“It’s a long story, but basically…” Joel gave a very brief summary completely leaving out the initial introduction or his being a prince, “and after I got invited, this guy,” he pointed to me, “decided it sounded like a good idea to try to come along too, and he bugged the people at the State Department — like your diplomatic service — until they let him take the exam with me.”

The conversation turned to living arrangements and their impressions of the city.  They weren’t surprised that we were living away from home.  The academy had an international reach.  The location of our apartment on the other hand…

“South Riverside is a pretty fancy area,” said Amy.  “Your government is paying for a whole townhouse just for the two of you?”

Joel shrugged and looked over at me.  “I think they bought the whole building?”

I shrugged back. “I think so.  Our neighbors are mostly the first few US diplomats.”

Joel gestured at the head of the room.  “Looks like the teacher’s here.  It’s good to meet you three.”

“Yeah, for me too,” I said.

“We can talk more over lunch or something,” Jack replied.

The teacher introduced himself as Mr. Kirill; after taking attendance, he continued: “I will be your homeroom teacher, as well as for English Literature.  I recognize a fair number of you from English last year.  I’m fine with your settling at whichever desks you’d like but if you start chatting with neighbors too much, I will make you pick at random instead.

“Before we start in on lessons, we’ve got one administrative thing to take care of.  As Ms. Shevariet said earlier, the student council needs volunteers from each home room, so who wants to be on the organizing committees?  It looks like we need two people each for the Festival of Nations and for the class trip.  Do you have anything to add?”

He was looking over at Elise who was sitting in front of the room, near the window.  She shook her head, “That’s fine, Mr. Kirill.”

“OK, volunteers?”

Three girls from near the front of the room raised their hands.  When Mr. Kirrill called on them, all three wanted to volunteer for the festival, and none for the class trip.  He looked at Elise, who told him that a third volunteer would be fine.

“So, anybody for the class trip?”

Still no more hands.  He looked to Elise again, who this time stood up and spoke directly to the class.  “Do you really want all the other homerooms to get to decide where we go, and what we do?”

Then Joel raised his hand.  Kirrill looked down at the roster, “You wanted to volunteer, Mr. Ross?”

“That’s right,” said Joel, looking straight at Elise as he said it.

Pt. II, Ch. 27: [Interlude/Amy] “I hear we’re getting a couple of new students”

Interlude
Upper School Main Building, Classroom 2-C

The first day of the new year; most of the class had arrived already and were around their seats talking about their summer break.  Jack and Kai were discussing the latest rumor.

“I hear we’re getting a couple of new students,” said Jack.

“Girls?” asked Kai.

“With our luck, not just guys but ones who are going to get all the girls.”

Just then Amy Lee startled Jack with a pat on both shoulders. After he settled down, she borrowed the desk next to him and told them “Neither girls nor any particular risk of getting all of them from what I hear.”

“How do you know?” asked Jack.

“One of the seniors on track told me what she saw on Saturday,” said Amy.  “Two guys about our age and their families went into the admin building and afterwards got a tour.  She said they seemed ‘pretty normal.’”

“Oh well,” said Kai.

“You two can’t get any of the girls here, why would transfer students be any different?”

Their curiosity was short-lived, as two young men came in, escorted by one of the assistant deans, and instead of finding free desks looked a bit confused.  Amy looked at both; other than being white guys with dark hair, they were a mismatched pair.  One was close to six feet tall and athletic, with a well-fitting uniform.  The other was middling in height — looking short next to the other — and with a uniform that looked a bit oversized on him and so there wasn’t much sign of his build.  Where the first had an open smile and was blandly handsome, the second had more of a nervous look about him, and unusually, wore glasses.

Both had silver pins, so they must have scored very well on the entrance exams and earned a full scholarship that way.  Not that surprising; the school only admitted a few new students in their second year, and neither one looked like the child of a VIP who would get in through their parents’ connections.  However, she did not recognize the pattern — most students entitled to a pin wore a symbol of their nationality.  Most, of course, wore the dragon of Feldaren, and she thought she’d seen them for all the old alliance countries.  This flattened bird was new to her.

My first computers (originally a post on Quora)

Commodore 64, fall 1983 – I remember the exact date, but it’s not relevant here beyond that it was for my birthday.

Probably half the computer geeks of my generation started on the 64. 😀

I don’t know exactly how my parents paid, but it was after one of the big price drops — we’d been talking over the summer about a Timex-Sinclair 2000 (a US-market licensed re-badge of the ZX81 for our friends from outside the US) but the price had dropped enough that I got the 64 instead.

Initially I had only a tape drive, and an old 12? black and white TV I got as a hand-me-down. Within the next year or so, we added a disk drive (1541), a 300-baud modem (the “Modem 300”, slightly nicer than the original VICModem), and a printer — and my parents upgraded the living room to a color TV so I got the much bigger B&W from the living room for my computer use (and eventually a green-screen but direct composite monitor.)

For my own use I stuck with Commodores a bit past the point it was reasonable – when my first C64 died I got a 128 sometime I think in the ’85-86 or ’86-87 school years.  That came to Mexico with us for the ’87-88 school year and we discovered that Commodore stuff was worth more down there used than it was new in the states, so that and the 1541 got sold there. If I’d been smart, I’d have gotten some kind of basic PC with the proceeds and some money from my grandfather when I got back, but instead I got a Commodore 128D and a 1581. Good times, but arguably already obsolete in the summer-fall of ’88.

I stayed on the Commodore platform until the summer of ’91 when I was able to get my folks to get me one of the first inexpensive PC laptops (a Packard Bell 286 — probably a the unimaginatively-named PB286NB although that’s trying to rediscover a model number which I was never clear on) and have been on PCs ever since (although I’ve owned a few Macintoshes, never as my primary system; the dumbest was the LC II I bought because the girl I was dating at the time had a Mac – inflation-adjusted it was far and away the most expensive of them, too.)

The one other machine my folks got for their use (and never really figured out) was the Epson PX-8 Geneva— bought like many people who got one, through the fun old DAK catalog, sometime during the ’86-87 school year. Quickly became loaned to me, and it’s the one ancient machine I still own in original vs. having collected later. Relatively powerful for a CP/M machine, and had an amazingly long battery life… but had a non-backlit, 8-line LCD screen that looked more like a giant calculator or digital watch than a computer’s. I used it to take notes in school all the way into the mid-1990s because the battery life was so good, and because compared to a then-modern PC laptop it was very discreet and obvious that I wasn’t just ignoring class to play games.

My folks got an IBM desktop – I’m unclear if it was around the same time before Mexico or right after in the summer-fall of ’88 – so I got familiar with PCs with that. Actual IBM XT (5160) although none of the add-on boards were IBM – it had an Hercules graphics card (possibly the plus?) and a multi-io card (possibly Everex) and I think that was it – although it’s possible the HDD controller was separate from the multi-IO?. Interestingly, they sold it to us with 640KB on the motherboard, but with the dip switches misconfigured for 256K. We actually bought 384KB for the multi-IO board and then discovered it wouldn’t boot with the extra RAM enabled, which led to discovering the motherboard RAM. My dad tool the waste of about $150 better than I would have. I can’t remember if it had two floppies or one, and the drive was an ST-238.

Re: Quora, I’m slowly deleting my content from their platform, and interesting personal bits will be showing up here, entirely irregularly.